essay comments

What i did well:
>I identified a wide range of techniques used throughout magazines.
>I made detailed comments on the front cover, analysing the majority of the cover in depth.
>I used a chatty style to keep the reader interested.
>I made references to the case study.

Room to improve:
>Mention the left side third.
>Make notes before-hand to ensure that i leave nothing out. (the left-side-third)

>I feel i did well on my essay i enjoyed writing it; and i liked the fact we got to analyse work that is well known and being published.

my media homework. :D

I have chosen to use my friend Katherine key, i chose her due to the fact she is beautiful and well know; i think her image is respected by many girls and will catch the attention of others. The age group i am going for is around 20, i dont want it to seem to young however on the other hand i want to attract the attention of the old students and teachers :)